Hi Benny, Jenny and Miss Word i made my story haha. Guess what i showed it to my friend and it had insults in it. That was not my intention i took some words from the dictionary and put them in sentences. Some sentences made sense others didnt. Basically the story was on insults. I am not going to put on this site dont want anyone to read it. Back to the old drawing board in learning more stuff in Mandarin. Thanks everyone.
Zai Jian:)